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PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 8:24 am 
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hey, just got a lull in university work so i got busy and made this over the last two days.

please let me know what you think, it will also be on the myspace in the next couple of hours.

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finished arthur lyman track.mp3


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PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 2:09 pm 
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 2:20 pm 
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this is alright fam I think it would benefit from some more hats and maybe a clap on that snare. I liked the switch ups good job. keep it up
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 2:24 pm 
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check this link out so that u can learn how to add the music player to your post... it really works out easier...

now for the beat...

first off im on my laptop with no headphones so if there was a bass line i didnt hear it...

the ring on the samples reminds me of an sp1200... good job on that...

it's nice and choppy as well... and i like the pan action on the samples as well(unless my minds tricking me)

overall i think its a good beat... if u dont have a bass line goin then add one... peace!

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PostPosted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 11:54 pm 
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niq names wrote:
the ring on the samples reminds me of an sp1200... good job on that...

it's nice and choppy as well... and i like the pan action on the samples as well(unless my minds tricking me)

overall i think its a good beat... if u dont have a bass line goin then add one... peace!


well said niq!
good track

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 27, 2010 8:08 am 
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thanks for the kind words, it felt good to level up in terms of my own satisfaction with the process... definitely giving me motivation to go after the next one.

interested to hear what more people think still.

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