hey, just got a lull in university work so i got busy and made this over the last two days.
please let me know what you think, it will also be on the myspace in the next couple of hours.
thanks
finished arthur lyman track.mp3
new track. feedback?
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sounds fresh man!
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this is alright fam I think it would benefit from some more hats and maybe a clap on that snare. I liked the switch ups good job. keep it up
Peace
Peace
As the night slipped away I cradled the city in my arms
and placed a kiss on the skyline from beyond the stars
and placed a kiss on the skyline from beyond the stars
Re: new track. feedback?
http://sp-forums.com/viewtopic.php?f=12&t=5147
check this link out so that u can learn how to add the music player to your post... it really works out easier...
now for the beat...
first off im on my laptop with no headphones so if there was a bass line i didnt hear it...
the ring on the samples reminds me of an sp1200... good job on that...
it's nice and choppy as well... and i like the pan action on the samples as well(unless my minds tricking me)
overall i think its a good beat... if u dont have a bass line goin then add one... peace!
check this link out so that u can learn how to add the music player to your post... it really works out easier...
now for the beat...
first off im on my laptop with no headphones so if there was a bass line i didnt hear it...
the ring on the samples reminds me of an sp1200... good job on that...
it's nice and choppy as well... and i like the pan action on the samples as well(unless my minds tricking me)
overall i think its a good beat... if u dont have a bass line goin then add one... peace!
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Re: new track. feedback?
well said niq!niq names wrote: the ring on the samples reminds me of an sp1200... good job on that...
it's nice and choppy as well... and i like the pan action on the samples as well(unless my minds tricking me)
overall i think its a good beat... if u dont have a bass line goin then add one... peace!
good track
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thanks for the kind words, it felt good to level up in terms of my own satisfaction with the process... definitely giving me motivation to go after the next one.
interested to hear what more people think still.
peace
interested to hear what more people think still.
peace
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I never climbed the ladder in front of me to see where it did not lead. Only when I had never reached the top would I not have seen if the climb was not worth it.
I never climbed the ladder in front of me to see where it did not lead. Only when I had never reached the top would I not have seen if the climb was not worth it.
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bump
http://soundcloud.com/ghett-smart
I never climbed the ladder in front of me to see where it did not lead. Only when I had never reached the top would I not have seen if the climb was not worth it.
I never climbed the ladder in front of me to see where it did not lead. Only when I had never reached the top would I not have seen if the climb was not worth it.