a little jazz loop

JayLost · Post by **JayLost** » Wed Apr 22, 2009 6:04 am

http://www.box.net/shared/4emkzvkglx

V-F! · Post by **V-F!** » Wed Apr 22, 2009 9:16 pm

Hey dude. Some honest feedback on this. I think it needs to be a bit faster with something to push the beat along. Like even some 1/8th note high hate would really pull this together. Also not really feeling the bass. To be fair I decided to check some of your other stuff. The stranger was much better. It had the 1/8th note hi hats I was talking about and sounded like a much more well balanced production. Keep on working man, with more beats like the stranger your on your way.

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JayLost · Post by **JayLost** » Wed Apr 22, 2009 9:38 pm

thanx fam much appriciated yeah i think the bass was kinda bla and just there i feell you on that thanx for giving the other tunes a listen as well

Les Braun · Post by **Les Braun** » Wed Apr 22, 2009 9:54 pm

JayLost wrote:thanx fam much appriciated yeah i think the bass was kinda bla and just there i feell you on that thanx for giving the other tunes a listen as well

I really feel sorry for you since your getting a lot of honest feedback lately

I didn't think the drums fitted well but that's probably a taste thing. Other than that I liked it

JayLost · Post by **JayLost** » Wed Apr 22, 2009 11:32 pm

thanx 8-bit but yo i have a question are you gay? because you act it somtimes and dont trip dude its all good ..just not my thing...anyway later hater

ColeRockLee · Post by **ColeRockLee** » Wed Apr 22, 2009 11:54 pm

Sounds nice to me. Could maybe filter the bass a little and add some kinda loose, swinging open hihats.

Euclid Ov Oåklånd · Post by **Euclid Ov Oåklånd** » Thu Apr 23, 2009 1:35 am

I would just increase the tempo and change the bass. I like how the sample sounds nice and crispy.

JayLost · Post by **JayLost** » Thu Apr 23, 2009 2:48 am

thanx for the feed back guys ..very helpfull but now that i listen to this track i think im just gunna toss it

bord of it lol and to lazy to fix atm thanx again

Les Braun · Post by **Les Braun** » Thu Apr 23, 2009 8:49 am

JayLost wrote:thanx 8-bit but yo i have a question are you gay? because you act it somtimes and dont trip dude its all good ..just not my thing...anyway later hater

most of what i type up on here isn't meant to be taken seriously, as you might have noticed