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Hey dude. Some honest feedback on this. I think it needs to be a bit faster with something to push the beat along. Like even some 1/8th note high hate would really pull this together. Also not really feeling the bass. To be fair I decided to check some of your other stuff. The stranger was much better. It had the 1/8th note hi hats I was talking about and sounded like a much more well balanced production. Keep on working man, with more beats like the stranger your on your way.


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thanx fam much appriciated yeah i think the bass was kinda bla and just there i feell you on that thanx for giving the other tunes a listen as well

I really feel sorry for you since your getting a lot of honest feedback lately

I didn't think the drums fitted well but that's probably a taste thing. Other than that I liked it

thanx 8-bit but yo i have a question are you gay? because you act it somtimes and dont trip dude its all good ..just not my thing...anyway later hater

Sounds nice to me. Could maybe filter the bass a little and add some kinda loose, swinging open hihats.

I would just increase the tempo and change the bass. I like how the sample sounds nice and crispy.

thanx for the feed back guys ..very helpfull but now that i listen to this track i think im just gunna toss it bord of it lol and to lazy to fix atm thanx again

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