a beyonce remix im working on...

[Jollyollyman]

so yesterday i was messin around trying to do something new to me, and i did this right here, and thought it sounded similar to Sweet Dreams by beyonce (i kind of like it, ). so i gave it a kind of hazy slowed down feel, because i didn't like the cheesy original beat, but i'm not sure how its working. am i on the right track? some feedback would be appreciated to a downright creepy extent.

http://www.box.net/shared/r7ey2luqae