first beat

[jimmyboyforget]

Feedback appreciated. A bit different than what most people post on here.

https://soundcloud.com/dawinna/charmander

[spwarlock]

Feedback appreciated. A bit different than what most people post on here.

https://soundcloud.com/dawinna/charmander

cool...only feed back would be to add some change ups in the song so its not as repetitive(one of my biggest problem areas).As far as the sounds on the track i dig it:)

[Euclid Ov Oåklånd]

I agree with spwarlock, variation and dynamics is very useful to keep interest up. I'm diggin' the john philip sousa march vibe on the drum track and the sound selections are solid. I listened on craptop speakers so I don't have mix suggestions. Very good first beat