Been workin on beats for one of my MCs all week, decided to take a break and try to do something different... I guess more "emotional"

Once again though, I'm worried that this beat doesn't make sense. ("Sense" as in, the listener will have no clue what's going on and it just sounds like random stuff going on / or the progressions are hard to follow )
Let me know what you all think
http://soundcloud.com/jon_blount/next-2-u_1st-draft
thanks in advance
Also, I would love to return the feedback, drop a link to something you did if you'd like, and I'll glady check it out. Tis the least I can do!