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dinner-for-two
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new joint

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yo here's a new song i made on the 404 and recorded the vocals in cool edit pro.

http://www.mixcloud.com/hoonbeats/iesvocalcut3/

2 verses but still need to add cuts to it later

i also go by the name shortytallcan on the forums lol
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smoothe track
at 1.10 starts the magic...
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Aha, dude I've been trying to figure out who the heck shortytallcan is for like the last couple weeks. Third time you've come with heat on the beat and the vocals. Keep em comin man, you've got it.
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yea man..this beat is mad dope and the lyrics are on point- nice cadence and some good multi-syllable rhymes in there.The groggy laid back delivery really fits the mood well.And I really dig the overall message of the song...Sometimes when things arent going so well,you just gotta say fuck it,still find ways to enjoy life and realize what a ridiculous ass backwords country/world we live in.Life should simply be about doing what makes us happy-every single day.It would be kinda ill to hear maybe a remix with a beat maybe 5-8 or so bpms faster..5 or so bpms would still keep it at a really slow beat, but you wouldn't have the little parts where you have to drag out the lyrics....dope shit though,respect...1
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Post by dinner-for-two »

yo thanks for the input on the song. that's real cool you guys took the time to do that. imma work some more and post later.
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