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IIIII
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http://capsandblankets.tumblr.com/post/677559113
believe me, I am aware of the cheesy lyrics
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good sounds
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Nice beat!
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U didnt rap about making $ or shooting Bitches but its aight. lol. dope song man, nice vibe too it. I diggz.
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lovely beat, raps were gimmicky and dope in a ll cool j i need love way, im diggin it, btw just gave both your owl tapes a relisten the other day, top shelf dankness, shit takes you down the rabbit hole :shock:
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Post by Ill Green »

I don't think the vocals need to be redone. It kinda fits the beat. It does feel 3 in the morning club music though.
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thanks homies.
i redid vox
http://capsandblankets.tumblr.com/post/712672109
it just needed more consistency so i think i achieved that
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Post by shank_carvin »

beats interesting bit lo-fi for me but its alright the lyrics are ok i spose. keep it up
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