Wood Shack (part 3 of 3)

Ill Green · **Posted:** Wed Jun 09, 2010 9:46 pm

This is part C of a three part piece I did for the EP. Wood Shack.

http://www.myspace.com/illgreenmusick

Just made the beat and rhymed off the top. I wanted it to sound weird.

Yes, the EP will drop sometime this week...as soon this dj sends some cuts.

3 piece wig.

UbiquitousCanuck · **Posted:** Wed Jun 09, 2010 11:35 pm

dirty stuff man!

SOLUS · **Posted:** Thu Jun 10, 2010 8:17 pm

eeewww!! Pure Grit

ellaguru · **Posted:** Thu Jun 10, 2010 10:55 pm

man YOU HAVE TO RAP MOREEEE!!!
good flow indeed and functional beat to the voice.

Ill Green · **Posted:** Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:08 pm

ellaguru wrote:

man YOU HAVE TO RAP MOREEEE!!!
good flow indeed and functional beat to the voice.

Thats just a tidbit from a complete song appearing on the EP, so thats like 1/3 of it (and the least part).

Felix Tha Kat · **Posted:** Thu Jun 10, 2010 11:27 pm

Dope Beat rhymes are well Ill Green!!!

Vaughnilla · **Posted:** Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:45 am

I have to agree with ellaguru, you should rap more.

and as usual the beats are dirtier than harry

Ill Green · **Posted:** Fri Jun 11, 2010 11:11 am

Thanks fellas!!

Yeah Vaughn, I hear that alot, its just that the rhymes come to me when a beat sparks it, so I spend more time on my samplers and/or listening to records until those voices in my head drop some verbs. Sometimes I sit and spend hours just staring at a blank sheet with a pen in my hand and nothing comes out. I don't force it though, but when I write I image the words like Bruce Lee smashing through a hundred guards, its gotta snap necks, cause seizures, bloody noses and hard kicks to the gut.

Peace

V-F! · **Joined:** Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:37 am **Posts:** 1109

Good rap homie. I would have liked to hear it without that big pause and then another 4 bars. Nothing wrong with freestyling the track but when you fall off if you pick it right back up and pretend like its all the same rap thats cool you know. Also some overdubs for when your voice gets a bit weaker and a hook etc would be great. You have a great voice/raps/flow so that the most important thing!

Ill Green · **Posted:** Sat Jun 12, 2010 11:08 pm

Good shit Bridge! I like feedback from other rappers. Yeah, I get a little wild in freestyles and unpredictable. In that long pause, I actually muted the parts that I thought didn't fit with an ill green flow. But if you really wanna know...

...Cauz you know I'm Ill Green
Fuck your girl in the ass and deposit the cream
have her shit out a james dean or london queen
dripping out her jeans claiming its the beans...

See what I mean. :mrgreen:

I thought the part with "I shake this to the rich and famous..." would be a hook. Just experimenting with this track really.

I did listen and jot down the freestyle and wrote it. On the EP it'll be straight.

Peace

Wood Shack (part 3 of 3)

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