New SP-404 song, feedback?

[Jeroen]

These are 2 songs I recorded yesterday, feedback is more than appreciated.
For more ===> http://www.myspace.com/cloudsisee

Trains.mp3
Swamp.mp3

[SOLUS]

I really liked this, it took me on a trip.

[Deardeer]

Nice tracks, refreshing sound. I like "trains" very much.
I'll check out your myspace!

[ellaguru]

hi
thre is something there that reminds me somewhat of my bloody valentine...
good drone music.
try to check what Sleepnumbs do...

[Jeroen]

hi
thre is something there that reminds me somewhat of my bloody valentine...
good drone music.
try to check what Sleepnumbs do...

I'll take that as a compliment, though this wasn't inspired by them at all
thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it.

[Les Braun]

Cool stuff.
I liked how trains started, but to be honest I didn't like where the drums kicked in, but maybe it's just a taste thing.
Swamps was nice!

[Jeroen]

Cool stuff.
I liked how trains started, but to be honest I didn't like where the drums kicked in, but maybe it's just a taste thing.
Swamps was nice!

I definitely have to work on my beats! To be honest I don't like him very much either, I'm still looking for some inspiration for a more experimental beat (something more suitable with the rest of the song)
Thanks anyway!

[Les Braun]

Well you're definitely good for a beginner. I really dig those tracks on your space.
Keep it up dood!

[tropical_danny]

Nice tracks! really liked it, still needs a bit polishing. Keep it up!