Discreetly Stuck In A Time Loop - Feedback PLEASE!

[mezZo]

hey guys i'm relatively new to the forum and the 404, but i've been getting a lot more accustomed to using it on every project i do now. tell me what you think of this tune...

http://soundcloud.com/unsui/sol-e-discr ... -time-loop

[ellaguru]

nice track! cool.

[Jollyollyman]

very nice, i downloaded it for my itunes

[mezZo]

thanks very much! wasn't expecting people to like it...

[Slumlord88]

Not bad ...but it failed to get my head noddin....yet i still liked it for being unique and super spacey/trippy...

Needs some umph in the drums(my Opinion)...keep it up...

[mezZo]

you're right the drums do need to get beefed up but oh well. that's why i didn't really like it too well.
i'm on to the next song. that song was actually kind of old. made it about 3 months ago...