christmas present for my girlfriend

[half hour handshake]

i recorded a song for my girl and i just wanted to know what you guys think of it or if its totally messed up and i'm standing to close to the picture to notice it. i know i'm a little late but she isnt done with my present either so thats not really bad.

http://www.tindeck.com/listen/lupo

thank you for listening.
kevin

[DREWDANK]

more energy in your voice. i like it though man alot. sounds like a cuter nirvana ha. but for real sick!

[balazs]

the begining was cool, but a little too calm for my taste. I liked it more at the end when you picked it up and got funky with the sp(or whatever drum machine)

[Les Braun]

You need more energy in your voice!
But in all it sounds very clean. Nice job!

[half hour handshake]

thanks for the replies, guys.
i'm glad you all liked the song
i was just recovering from a cold when i was recording and i'm not the most talented singer anyways, but i'm working on it. and yeah, basically everything comes from the 404.
it took me almost a year to finally get comfortable with this machine...

[DREWDANK]

it took me almost a year to finally get comfortable with this machine...

everyone had the same thing. but it does grow on you

[IIIII]

thats really cool, interesting style! i've wanted to do something like this for my girlfriend but i get too shy writing heartfelt lyrics

[DREWDANK]

thats really cool, interesting style! i've wanted to do something like this for my girlfriend but i get too shy writing heartfelt lyrics

same here. so i just make beats.