here's some self indulgent guitar and synth stuff i did, i'm trying to get better at keeping things interesting for 3 mins, if you could let me know what you think, i'd appreciate it.
http://www.box.net/shared/fca6rx219h

Nice! I think you did a good job at keeping things interesting. I love how the drums kick in. It reminds me of early Modest Mouse stuff.

thanks a lot, i appreciate it.

i've only heard 1 modest mouse song but i did like it, i'll have to check them out

cool sounds Trenchant. have you got a myspace or a site with this indie rock project?
ps

modest mouse is a nice band.

^thanks man. and my myspace is here http://www.myspace.com/jollyollymanmusic but that's just my regular hip hop beats and stuff. i might add stuff like this soon though

You should combine that shit together. Mix this style with hip-hop, it would probably sound dope!

yeah i'd like to try that, i just don't want it to end up sounding something like this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hY1rbOM7vbg lol. that songs good for what it is, but not what im going for.

Ah man...that shit is just horrible. That is definitely not what I had in mind.