Rough Draft of A song made today

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jnishiyama
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Rough Draft of A song made today

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So here is a song me and my bandmate made today. We put in a few chopped up Tupac verses from Fuck all Y'all, real quiet, to just show the rapping potential. Give me feedback and ask me any questions you might have!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/125348120f19e49b/

P.S. Very rough, we mess up, i am playing guitar while sampling so it is pretty shitty. and as a joke i bump the volume at the end so watch out. And i switched it to mp3 so sound quality is a bit sketch...Dont steal this shit!
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Post by Euclid Ov Oåklånd »

I think that the synth is a little to busy and repetitive, I would also never "bump" the volume at the end of a track. If you blow out someones speakers they'll be pissed. Despite those two things I still think it's a solid track with good direction, I'd experiment with phrase variations. That's dope that you play that sampler and guitar at the same time.
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Post by ColeRockLee »

Doc pretty much nailed the critique. Nice track, I really dig the vibe.
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