my first "something" on sp 404! :D

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wingzz
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my first "something" on sp 404! :D

Post by wingzz »

im happy :D this is cuted selection form all beat without a basss line

http://www.speedyshare.com/351239314.html

what you think?

peace
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Post by balazs »

pretty good , especially for a first track. The drums are a bit quiet but not too bad. keep them beats comin
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your opinion cost much for my big thx juxt im still learning this shit :)
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Post by drewzle »

this sounds sick wingzz, good work!
sweet melody, matches the drum pattern nicely.
you should definitely throw a bassline in there, to complete it.

keen to hear your next beats : )
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Post by Funkyoldcrate »

Very nice.
Cool, kinda smokey, summer vibe.
Hit it with some bass and increase the length.
I like it.
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Post by wingzz »

thx for comments Guys! im really happy that u like it.

here is my (now make'd XD) myspace
http://www.myspace.com/wingzoch
and it have 2 versions of a track with some bass lines (added with real bass guitar, yea i play on bass guitar ;p ) what version is better? beat1 have 1 line of bass and beat2 have 2 basslines.

thx peace!
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Post by Funkyoldcrate »

I thought # 2 but after a second go of both I think I like the first one better. :wink:
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Post by drewzle »

i think i like #2 more than #1
sick bass man, i wish i could play
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Post by Robinson »

Big Ups Vivi. - That's wassup.
Keep those beats comin'.
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Post by wingzz »

thx guys! :D

i have made a new beat. the beat have not bassline but add tomorow some bass.
http://www.myspace.com/wingzoch "beat3"
i made it in 10min i think its weird and funny ;p
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and new beat 4 without bass line
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Post by wingzz »

new beat named "broken wing" what u think?
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