Anyone Wanna Colab on Bomb

ZNDK17 · Post by **ZNDK17** » Sat Apr 19, 2008 5:58 pm

Sup everyone, So I been lsitening to the beat i made called Bomb and I really wanna hear some lyrics on it so if anyone is interested in spitting something dope let me know...u can check out the beat on http://www.myspace.com/stackowax17

PHeMoX · Post by **PHeMoX** » Sat Apr 19, 2008 9:36 pm

I'm not a rapper, but I really feel this one. I might take a stab at it, as it reeeaaally begs for a rapbattle-style aggressive rap.

However, one small critique... it gets a tad repetitive after a while. Better add some more variation ( like sometimes mute the main string/base melody ), it probably makes it easier to rap to too.

ZNDK17 · Post by **ZNDK17** » Tue Apr 22, 2008 3:31 pm

ok koo let me know but unfortunately im not gonna be able to change it up