new to lofi beat making, Opinions ?

[Dara]

Hey I just wana know peoples opinions on this beat that i made a few days ago, im new to production in general but I just recently tried to get into lofi style production, Im getting an SP404sx soon, its on its way from america (I live in Ireland)
Any tips or tricks ? at the moment im working in ableton with not a lot of plugins

https://soundcloud.com/officialdaramusic/rhett-faker

[Big Pon the Wookie]

nice shit. no tips really lol just keep goin. as time goes you'll find your methods and styles and shit.