Have creepy thoughts in your mind?

[fathom]

Working on some new stuff. It's just a sketch at the moment. some feedback would be helpful. https://soundcloud.com/phathom-1/98-bpm

[fathom]

So some of the offline feedback i got, the drums are off time and kinda random, kinda needs a direction, and maybe some b movie vocal samps.

Drums are supposed to out of sync

needs a direction i can def. agree with

b movie samps i was thinking but not sure what type ( creepy crawlie, serial killer, etc>>)

Some online help would be helpful, thanks.

[BLAXMYTH]

bro, i'm no sp pro but;
dont sweat your drums, the ones that are there are fine.
maybe think about adding another layer of effected drums, delay n reverb

b movie samples...if you fuck with adlibs n random sample vibes, take a day and netflix or otherwise, some b movie shit and only sample what makes you say "hell yeah"

direction...this one is all on you, if its drink or herb or a dark room by yo self thinking about ill shit, take and imagine, it'll come to you in time.

honestly, I can tell what vibe you are going for, all I know is the best thing for this track will come when you let art be art and go offline and find it on your terms.

well at least thats what I'd tell myself if I was you...

the rest of this can be heeded or disregarded...
If someone else on this forum gives you the answers you want, congrats to you and them, but my mind is constantly thinking, how do i complete the vibe...fact is, thats the struggle and its all yours, good bad and ugly. you'll get it when it reveals itself to you...which could be never...maybe forever...if you dont succeed, Nietzsche

[fathom]

thanks

[Jovi]

I'd probably just work on getting used to all of the functions on the sp, finding ways to streamline beat making, etc.

I'd just mess around with more ways to vary things. Maybe find some chops from that sample and put them in their like licks to liven things up if your not going for a progression.

[fathom]

Jovi, thanks.