Shroom Jazz (looking for feedback)

[TheDingo]

https://soundcloud.com/dingobeats/shroom-jazz

Yo, I made this all on the Sp-404sx and am trying to get my mixdowns and my structure better as I'm trying to makes beats for my homie to rap to. Hope somebody enjoys this beat anyways feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thanks all

[r4ph431]

dope sample, i like where you're going with this but the bass and sub are off key.

[TheDingo]

Thanks or the feedback dude! By the sub do you mean the kick drum?

[ellaguru]

listned to monitors
maybe the piano part is a bit "covered" in the background by the drums, but seeing that the man has to rap on it, this is -maybe- ok for you

[Rabot]

mfx12