My First Dubstep!!!

[Kajamaz]

Hey guys, im new to the music industry and spent a little time making my first dubstep. I think it ended up nicely but its still a wip . http://soundcloud.com/kajamaz/subconcious-wip
Please comment on this post or in soundcloud about my song and tell me what you think and how i can improve upon it with exact times where i should improve. For Example - 0:00 stuff like that
THANKS ALOT GUYS!!!

[Leptic P]

that's dope but i enjoy especially the second part , keep it up !