lol i have my first vocal track

[DREWDANK]

i know i know.....im white....i suck....my first try ever
ive never really recorded anything either so yeah...dig it
make fun of me if you must

[drewzle]

link?

[Euclid Ov Oåklånd]

Yeah, I'm 'bout to make fun of your posting skills not your rapping skills. J/K

[DREWDANK]

OH OMG lol

www.myspace.com/kidsupremebeats


wow im a stupid....sorry

[balazs]

not enough energy or style. speak up man, have fun

[Rob P]

I agree with Juxt,you sounded pretty tense on the mic,don't worry wether you suck or not and give the best that you have.Remember,skills on the mic aren't only about lyrics but charisma,energy and flow.
Yeah mayne,just let loose and have fun.

[DREWDANK]

go check out do i smell salsa!!!!!

[balazs]

delivery is getting a little better, but need improve. work on lyrical content too. gotta put in a lot of time, practice, and thinking to become a lyricist. Could use better recording too- vocals dont punch thru the mix.

[drewzle]

i like this man
you have confidence and an ill upbeat style
keep at it for sure

[Euclid Ov Oåklånd]

I like what you got going, but here's my suggestions. 1. Work on delivery being on time like ups. 2. Smooth out the vocal I can tell your hold back the true style inside you. 3.Work on making the vocal track sit in the right frequency band so it's surrounded by the beat rather than floating over the top. Nice start, you'll be on your game if a few weeks if you practice and freestyle in your head every where you go.

[DREWDANK]

thx...i wanna be raw...but i always end uo getting goofy...or some refernce to something 80s.....
lol

[jbl]

i think bad salsa is ill. your drums kinda splat on headies from love story, like the bass is in need of tightenin. then again i'm using some sony cd350 so...

[Euclid Ov Oåklånd]

Just freestyle in your head while listening to your beats where ever you go and just look at situations unfolding around you while in a park or on a bus and rap off top about the things you see that way you'll always have a new topic if you lose your train of thought or trip up on the rhyme you had going.
Plus freestyling in a cipher is always more stimulating 'cause you can link off the next man like cold crush brothers and continue from their flow into yours and off to the next cat. Also one other thing you can do to get your skill up is do like word association and rap about whatever word pops in your head and go for as long as you can until you run out things to rap on and start a new word and repeat the process. Rhyming off the top of the dome is kinda like a trance state, you don't try to consciously focus on ideas as much as just open your mind and let the words flow into your mind and out your mouth if that makes any sense. Like most humans have a filter from their mind to their mouth so they don't offend people, but when I freestyle I try to turn this filter off so it's just a pure flow of expression at the moment it leaves your mouth and hits the mic. Then there's writing rhymes but I'll save that for later since this shit is way too long anyways.

[balazs]

Like most humans have a filter from their mind to their mouth so they don't offend people, but when I freestyle I try to turn this filter off so it's just a pure flow of expression at the moment it leaves your mouth and hits the mic.

thats an interesting way of putting it. and its true.
I used to MC a while back - when i would listen back at the recordings I notice a big difference in my delivery and sound depending on where I was and who I was with.

[DREWDANK]

hmmmm....seriously guys thx

this is gonna help so much!!!!!
i dont really want to have ike choruss in my songs yet....kinda gay
but yeah thanks again!!!!