So here is a song me and my bandmate made today. We put in a few chopped up Tupac verses from Fuck all Y'all, real quiet, to just show the rapping potential. Give me feedback and ask me any questions you might have!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/125348120f19e49b/

P.S. Very rough, we mess up, i am playing guitar while sampling so it is pretty shitty. and as a joke i bump the volume at the end so watch out. And i switched it to mp3 so sound quality is a bit sketch...Dont steal this shit!

I think that the synth is a little to busy and repetitive, I would also never "bump" the volume at the end of a track. If you blow out someones speakers they'll be pissed. Despite those two things I still think it's a solid track with good direction, I'd experiment with phrase variations. That's dope that you play that sampler and guitar at the same time.

Doc pretty much nailed the critique. Nice track, I really dig the vibe.