Remix for a French Rap Track

[ellaguru]

hi
this is a (almost) final remix i'm makin for Kemiargola, a french rapper friend of mine.
it will take part of an album of remix by this this rapper.

this is the original version (+ video too)

http://www.kemiargola.com/clip.htm (<<the video)

http://www.box.net/shared/ofhq2p3opn (<<the original track)

and this is my version

http://www.box.net/shared/9t8mlglvnq

if you have suggestions on the mix/eq, go ahead!


guys, what do you think about it?

[Ill Green]

Yeah, I remember this. Will check it later, at work right now.

Peace

[Ill Green]

Dope intro, I like how you work the synth. The composition is nice too and I like the acid trip chorus. All it needs is for the vocals to be raised just a little bit.

Dope El!!!

[ellaguru]

thanx ILL!!
when you talk about "raise" the vocals, you mean low down the volum of it?
ps
your ep is magik man, listenin at work too

[niq names]

gotta say this in caps THIS IS FUCKING DOPE!!!!!!

i cant comment on the mix too much because of my comps speakers but they say that if u can hear all the elements of the beat then you'r headed in a good direction... so with that said...

[Ill Green]

thanx ILL!!
when you talk about "raise" the vocals, you mean low down the volum of it?
ps
your ep is magik man, listenin at work too

Thanks ellaguru!

No, I just meant to raise up the volume of the vocal just a little bit. At times his words felt like they were swimming in the beat instead of surfing on it. Just a notch or two will do. Its a dope piece, you did the synths?

[ellaguru]

gotta say this in caps THIS IS FUCKING DOPE!!!!!!

i cant comment on the mix too much because of my comps speakers but they say that if u can hear all the elements of the beat then you'r headed in a good direction... so with that said...

thanx niq, this means a lot man!!!

[ellaguru]

Thanks ellaguru!

No, I just meant to raise up the volume of the vocal just a little bit. At times his words felt like they were swimming in the beat instead of surfing on it. Just a notch or two will do. Its a dope piece, you did the synths?

thanx again Ill, i will try this advice with the Eq.
yes, all the synths parts is played/recorded by me. i think the most of all came from the roland JV1080 synth rack and , a little, from the roland d2...

ps
still, your e.p. is a very nice bomb!