Hey folks, I tried to rap for a while know, but most of the time I just freestyled over some drums and recorded it on tape. But I had some hard times in the last few weeks and actually began to write and this is the result

https://soundcloud.com/tiredoriots/sneakers

I guess most of you guys don´t speak german and my style/flow still is pretty amteur, I hope you enjoy it anyways

cheers

Beat was cool. You should cut some of the bass out from your vocal track and boost the midrange a little bit.

And sorry, I don't speak deutch, but I still listened. If you got too much bass on the vox, it can hurt the overall mix.