Greeting funky friends as always...
Decided to attempt a few rhymes over one of my beats to bust out of my musical slump.

Enjoy, or laugh- either works lol...
PEACE!

http://soundcloud.com/ubiquitousone/tap ... r-bukowski

Sounds good, man. You got the shit.

Work on your mixing chops, tho. That plus your chops will put you over the edge.


If you want specifics: your vocal sounds like it's clipping, like it needs to be EQ'd (hi-pass filter at 70-100hz, presence boost, cut out some 350hz mud, etc), maybe a dash of slapback on the vox, and I mean *dash*...

anyway, keep it up!

Cheers.

respect man, appreciate the kind words.

I agree my mixing quality is always terrible...i should have mentioned this was all just ran into the 404 at the same time with compression(beat from mpc into the rca input and the mic in the mic input) so it was bound to sound terrible lol.
Just having some fun for now until the mic skills are there..

PEACE!

nice track and cool flow
and take a look at the heavy swing on the final part: that's jazz!