little promo from "versus"-only 3/4ths th evverse,gonna addd some horn stabs (maynerd ferguson loop) and percussion,intro,etc...just wanted to get on the mic,felt good.any feedback good or bad is appreciated though,for real.peace,thanks for taking the time...........11

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my chi weighs a ton

Sounds ill, like some Lord Finesse beat. Rhymers were dope too.

I would put some reverb on the second snare to make it sound like when a ruler is slammed on the desk in school, but thats me. Peace

word man,thanks..both voices is me.. coulda made the loer one higher(louder) but i slipped my tongue on a couple parts...just practice..think i'm actually gonna put a metalic triangle/tamborine over one of the snares,& a reverb clap on another-the snares are from the sample itself-its just a 2 bar loop.how your b-day go fam?

bump....

warm voc again!
nice flow (again)!
cool dark blues atmosphere on sounds

is it the final mix?

nah el,not even close man,just practice really-the verse has like 16-20 more bars..and i'm gonna add more percussion sounds to the beat...eq it some more,re-record the vocal and run it thu efx on the sp-this is basically just 2 tracks on the br with a splash of reverb.thanks for the words though...







bump

b-b-b-b-bump,let your speakers pop.

SICK! sounds amazing! amazing production and flow *wadaaap*

honetly man - how do you record those vocals? sounds so nice and thick and crunchy but still airy enough and not dull! great work!

its just this br-900 man! well,plus i rap from my diaphragm like a singer...plus i hang the mic upside down?idk...all thats on there is some reverb.plus i been spitting,what,20 years now?yea,since i was 15. guess its a combo of all that maybe,lol.but thanks blue!word up..now i can stop bumping my own shit.then again... but wait till yall hear the entire verse,and the beat in complteted form,i'm mad proud of this one,just wrote it last week.peace!

yo for real man this shit is fucking dope bro for real man i want to hear the finished shit reminds me of stomping round the sko back in the days...respect

thanks ja! remember what i said about getting that one beat to natasha benningfiled.

yeah

very good joint "my gangsta", chilled out beat and nice verses. you know I love the voice man, sorry for bein on the lo lately

I like the beat. Nice harmonizing lol lol. Naw, for real, it sounds really good. I like the thickness of the beats and the vocals suit it perfectly.