i had to remake it twice because the program crashed when i finished both times, i had it better at least i have it memorized

http://unsatisfiedpoets.org/az/upload/RAP.mp3

I dug it, but I couldn't hear the lyrics too much. Need to pump up the vocals a notch or two. I like the beat, sounds like some old Sunz Of Man.

thanks, I was kind of wondering about the vocal because I thought the ch's were to clunky, the s's were ok because i recorded thru the 404 eq, with the highs turned down a bit, and the lows up a bit, and mids in the middle. other then just some compession very small touch of reverb and and tiny bit of eq on the mix to mix it in, Im going to use a different mic next and see if it fixes the ch's clunking, i dont remember the problem, i used to crank the highs awfully high I musta been def in those frequencies.

http://unsatisfiedpoets.org/az/upload/rap2.mp3

here is a shure pg 58 same recording techniqe sm 58 would be more wet and middy, i dont have one right now, but I would prefer it over the pg 58 .